Im sorry I have been swamped with work since I got well. I will try and get another installment up this week.
DO NOT FALL THRU ANY ICE IN THIS WEATHER!!!!!!
Even up to your knees. It goes over those high dollar boots and gets REAL COLD real fast.
Just fyi
Bob
I spell check in my word processor, onlything mispelled is on purpose, "gooberment" etc. Unless I missed something else. I will check better.
As Tasha rolled over cuddling up next to Steve she muttered “I hate sleeping in a cold bed alone” and as Steve apologized he gave her a hug, kissed her on the forehead and got out of bed. He then motioned for their ferocious guard dog Roscoe, a pure bread ankle biting Jack Russell to take his place next to Tasha.
Hello Icarry2. haven't finished reading this yet. Really good to the point that I have made it to. In line with incorrect word usage, in post #4 the following:
The correct word usage for "pure bread' should be "pure bred". I don't think the JRR is a loaf of bread. Spell check only looks for proper spelling not word usage. I catch a lot of my own errors when I proof my text and notice that. The suggestion of an outside proof reader is a good idea if you are interested in submitting a superior product.
But, I have been hooked and have put another book that I was reading largely aside to read your story. I hope to see your stuff on the book shelves soon. Good luck.