I like when you flip back and forth between the the wife and the main character.
Kinda like how Dan brown tells 3 different viewpwoints throughout the story, that all come together at the end
I like when you flip back and forth between the the wife and the main character.
Kinda like how Dan brown tells 3 different viewpwoints throughout the story, that all come together at the end
Reads well to me; draws you in to read further; keep going. Don't be so critical on your writing-- could be the only thing holding you down is yourself.